| It is just
after 7:00 Monday morning when Leslie Peters pulls into a nearly empty
parking lot behind Elm Street Elementary School. The only other cars
in the lot at this hour belong to Amy Burton, the school's other
literacy coach and Teddy Miranda, Elm Street's principal. When
Leslie joins them in the faculty's professional library, a reconfigured
storage space near Teddy's office, Amy is reviewing a bibliography
with him and he is laughing, shaking his head and suggesting that
she call Nancy Zelenka in Cleveland to ascertain how she gets all
that grant money for classroom libraries. Amy insists that Jane, the
teacher with whom she is working intensively, will
find it difficult to refine her teaching practice without a huge infusion
of books for her classroom library. Teddy glances
up at Leslie and asks with a laugh how she plans to spend the school's
money today. Leslie wonders aloud, agreeing with Amy that the school's
classrooms as well as its central library need immediate expansion,
if the district's 15% commitment to Cornerstone schools, might
be used for this purpose. They look
up briefly as Maria Ford, the Critical Friend, enters. She tells them
that she is working with three other Critical Friends and Debbie Miller
to update Cornerstone's professional and children's literature
library and that they will be able to use its new annotated bibliographies
later in the year. Three other
teachers, an instructional assistant and two parents join the group
and Elm Street's Leadership Team meeting is in full swing. Chairing
the meeting this week, Maria reviews the agenda that begins with a
discussion of burning issues followed by a "tool kit update”
(a brief review of new and revised items on the Cornerstone website)
and the weekly review of the coach's journals and two samples
of children's work. Teddy is jotting
notes on the Literacy Action Plan progress check
and wonders aloud if any other teachers have followed Amy's
lead and begun home visits to explore ways in which parents might
be invited to share their expertise and experiences in Elm Street's
classrooms. Amy reports that she has accompanied two third grade team
members on their first home visits and that they were very successful.
Teddy swings around in his chair and records the home visits on Elm
Street's monthly asset map next to one of the school's
four goals which reads: The Cornerstone Community promotes meaningful
communication and interaction among the school, parents, and the community
- the school actively learns from the parents and community
as well as teaches the parents and community.
By 8:30,
Leslie has switched on the lamps around her classroom and thrown the
shades open casting a soft, natural light onto six clusters of desks
and a "living room”, a large group meeting area with a
rug cordoned off by three low book shelves. She sets up six adult
sized chairs for the observers who will soon join her for the literacy
block. They begin to filter in, notebooks ready, even before the children
arrive and help Leslie set out cans of pencils, writer's notebooks
and plastic baskets of books at each table group.
One of the
teachers hopes aloud that Teddy remembers to have the children in
her class write in their writer's notebooks this morning.
"He
covered for me last week,” another teacher remarks, "and
he was fabulous. The kids loved it. He wrote in his own notebook and
shared it with them. I'm teaching determining importance and
he asked the kids to help him make decisions about what was important
enough to leave in his writing and what could be deleted. I've
never seen so many kids talking about taking out superfluous words.
It was great for them.”
Leslie writes
a morning message on a wipe off board to her 24 first graders as they
burst through the door. It's November and Leslie only has to
remind only DeShawn and Jessica that the stories they are bursting
to share with her should be captured, "before they drift away
like a loose balloon” in their writer's notebooks.
"I
knew that,” DeShawn says, "I just forgot for a second”.
"I understand, DeShawn,” Leslie replies, "and in
your writing today, I'd really like to challenge you to create
visual images in your readers' minds. Do you remember when we
talked about that in a Crafting session last week?” One of the
observing teachers points out that DeShawn didn't even remove
his jacket before he began to write, one foot tucked under him and
leaning intently over his notebook. Within a half hour, Leslie has
turned on a cd, the signal for her children that they should put away
their writer's notebooks and join her on the rug for a Crafting
session.
Down the
hall, Amy and her colleague teacher, Jane, are bent over a diagram
of Jane's classroom trying to decide how to separate the Invitational
Groups meeting area from the clusters of desks where children will
work during independent work time -- Composing.
"There
is just NO space in this room to do everything I want,” Jane
comments. "I need to make sure that the kids in the Invitational
Groups don't interrupt the others during Composing. When I stood
back and observed and took anecdotal notes as you suggested, I noticed
that, during Composing, the kids really need things pretty quiet around
them. Now that I'm doing better connecting my Crafting Session
focus - my teaching intention - to what the kids actually
have to experiment with as readers and writers, I find that their
focus and engagement is much more intense. I heard Kiesha tell Rachel
last week that she was trying to practice inferring in The Cricket
in Times Square and that unless Rachel was quieter that was going
to be really hard.”
Amy and Jane
laugh and return to their diagram to rethink the arrangement. Once
they are up and moving furniture, Amy asks, "Jane do you remember
if Christoff is in the Invitational Group we have going on inferring?
When we conferred with him yesterday, he said he had lots of inferences,
but when we really talked to him, he was retelling every last detail
in the chapter, not inferring at all.”
"I
noticed that and no, we don't have him in that group, but I
think we should ‘invite' him today. He has been caught
off guard by what we're doing. In the first few weeks of school,
Christoff was one of those kids who always had the correct, perfect
response before anyone else. His hand was up more than down! It seems
to me that he was so much more oriented toward the right answers and
very detailed retelling of details in books that he wasn't giving
himself time to think. I think he's improving - sometimes
I just ask everyone to give themselves the gift of quiet thought during
a Crafting Session or Invitational Group - and I notice that
he is learning how to stretch his thinking out rather than trying
to answer right away, but this is really difficult for him.”
Amy sets
up for a demonstration lesson while Jane retrieves the children from
Music. The time has been too short to finish their work on classroom
arrangement but Amy reminds herself that she isn't running off
to try to work with half a dozen other teachers - she'll
work intensively with Jane for at least four weeks before moving on
to coach another teacher. By then, not only will Jane's classroom
be arranged to encourage conversation as well as quiet work time for
children, Jane will be using her anecdotal observation notes and the
Cornerstone Literacy Framework to create long and short term plans.
Jane will then begin to work with her grade level colleagues while
Amy begins again with another colleague teacher.
Leslie is
writing on a blank transparency, the overhead projector amplifying
every word. "OK, writers, today in my writing I'm going
to use both of the learning outcomes you've been focusing on.
Help me remember what two learning outcomes you're trying to
use as readers and writers. Kenta?”
"We're
doing images in our heads, listening and seeing, touching and smelling
stuff we read about and we're trying to write so the kids who
read it will do that stuff too.”
"Why
is that important to a writer, Kenta?”
"It
is because other writers like Ralph Fletcher in that book Twilight
Comes Twice? He doesn't use that many words, but the words
he picked make almost a movie come on in your head - you can
hear birds, you can see fog on the water, but he doesn't have
to tell you that - if you're a reader, it's your
job to ask your mind to use images. If you're a writer you have
to remind your readers to do that, too. With your words.”
Leslie looks
over the children at the observing teachers who are incredulous.
"I
know,” she tells them, "it's amazing. Believe me,
they didn't start that way. I found that, when we were first
beginning to study images and I asked them to describe images they
had from books, they really just described the pictures - they
didn't really enhance the book's illustrations
and text meaning with their own images.
"So,
I realized that I needed to do a lot more thinking aloud. I needed
to use a wider variety of books in my think alouds and encourage them
to observe me using images to actually enhance my understanding of
a book before they really got into it like Kenta describes. Now, we're
starting to explore how writers write in a way that helps the reader
create images. That is a whole new thing and I've found I need
to do a lot of modeling - usually my own writing on the overhead
like we're doing today - and I'll use conferences
during the Composing time today to check their writing to see if they
can identify words they have written that are intended to help potential
readers use their own sensory images.” Leslie redirects her
attention to her first graders.
" Thanks
for waiting so patiently while I talked to our visitors,” Leslie
says warmly. "Now, Kenta told us that one your learning outcomes
right now is to understand books better and write more effectively
using the images in your mind. I mentioned that there is another learning
outcome on which you are working very hard right now. Anyone remember?
Grace?”
"It's
that one about making sure our sentences sound like language.”
Grace turns around, addressing the visiting teachers which draws smiles
from everyone. "You should tell your kids that sentences should
sound like language. Sometimes we put in too many words or not enough
and you can hear right away that it doesn't sound like language.”
"Grace,”
Leslie implores, slightly embarrassed, "It's up to our
visitors to make that decision. They're working with children
that have different strengths and needs. They will know best when
to help their children understand the syntactic system.”
Undeterred,
Grace turns again to the visitors and says, "It will help those
kids, I am for sure.” She nods gravely along with half a dozen
other first graders.
It's
noon and Leslie and Amy are eating and planning the study group that
will convene in Jane's room after school. Amy is rushing off
to her own classroom for the afternoon literacy block - the
fourth grade team is observing this afternoon while the PE and Music
teachers provide their children with an integrated movement and music
lesson, freeing the teachers to observe.
Leslie will
spend the afternoon working with Simon, the colleague with whom she
is working intensively at the time. They have used the Cornerstone
Literacy Framework surface structure teaching intentions to plan a
lesson designed to help his first graders use as many tactics as possible
when they come to an unknown word in text. Too many are freezing if
the word is too difficult to sound out. On this particular afternoon,
Simon will teach while Leslie observes. Tomorrow they'll switch
roles. They'll debrief as they move around the room conferring
with children and attempting to discover if they are, in fact, using
a great variety of tactics to identify unknown words.
"I'm
so glad we're going to meet in Jane's room this afternoon,”
Amy says, "I don't want everyone in the study group to
think that you create a literate learning environment overnight. They
saw the ‘before' last week, they'll see us in the
process of converting her room to a more intimate environment this
week and by next week, a lot will be in place.”
The coaches
are leading one study group on Monday, focused on rigorous and intimate
learning environments. The teachers are reading Joanne Hindley's
In the Company of Children and reviewing the Cornerstone Framework's
Living Language section. The coaches plan to lead this afternoon's
discussion with a question they hope will lead to a great deal of
sharing. The question - in what ways does your classroom
environment encourage independent learning for your students?
"Do
you think we should develop a couple other questions?” Kate
asks.
"You
know, it's tempting to do that, but in a way I think it's
over planning. If we do that then we're always stressing about
getting to the next question and moving the discussion along. I think
they've come so far, we need to trust that they'll keep
the discussion going every bit as much as we can.” Amy replies.
"Besides, Maria (Ford the Critical Friend) and Sara Kadish (the
district's strategy manager) will be here if we get into trouble
and they always find a way to pose questions that launch a thousand
ships!”
Teddy pokes
his head in at this moment and asks if he can observe Simon's
lesson this afternoon.
"Sure,”
Leslie laughs, "but you should bring some piece of text you
can use to model for the kids what you do when you come to an unknown
word. Bring some ghastly school law textbook or something.”
"That
will be no problem,” I'll be there with ghastly text in
hand, Teddy assures her and ducks out.
"What's
up tomorrow morning in your room?” Amy asks Leslie. "Jane's
kids are going on a field trip. I'd love to try that strategy
that Amanda and Yasontas are using in Jackson. Remember? One coach
teaches and the other feeds back to her and to the observing teachers
during the lesson. Are you up for it?”
"Absolutely.
We're working on images and I'd love for you to watch
to see if my think alouds are clear and precise enough. . .”
"Speaking
of plans, I need to sit down for a minute and record some of the work
we did in Jane's classroom this morning in my Coach's
Journal or I'm going to forget what we committed to for Wednesday
morning,” Amy says, more to herself than anyone else.
Do we
have it right? When Cornerstone staff members imagine the daily lives
of coaches, principals, parents, district strategy managers and Critical Friends, are we accurate? We realize that the work is (and should
be) extraordinarily intense, exhausting, difficult. There are times
when I'm sitting at home trying to do my own writing or returning
email that I'm terribly envious of you, in the field, having
the delicious opportunities to face those challenges. That complexity
in our daily work is what keeps us intellectually alive and challenged
in our chosen field. Our job is to provide support, through on-site
and distant professional learning, the Framework and Tool Kit, even
this newsletter, as you manage those challenges. Keep us posted, let
us know what you need.
Lucky
are we to have work that stretches us to the intellectual limit.
Have
a wonderful month, |